Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the
local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that
they can adapt to a new environment by establish a minority community. Discuss
these two views and give your opinion.
In recent years, population mobility has become increasingly high
throughout the world. While some suggest that newcomer should integrate into
local cultures, the opponents believe that being a member of minor community,
upholding their own traditions is good. In the following essay, the stark
contrast between the perspectives will be discussed.
On the one hand, freshmen could easily overcome cultural barriers at the
first status. Undeniably, the differences are inherent between people of different
nationality. For example, Western citizens are distinguishing from Asian
citizens in lifestyles, eat habit. Therefore, throughout the wave of
immigration derived from Asian countries, the immigrants should learn and blend
into lifestyles of their adopted country. Besides the opportunity of gaining
mutual understanding, they could also improve the proficiency of new languages.
Increasing the interaction with local, especially in the work place, offer a
good practice for newcomer. Also embarrassment is unavoidable for the first
time, their efforts will be paid off enriching vocabulary, enhancing grammar of
their second languages.
On the other hand, merging into indigenous norms is likely to ruin their
customs. By establishing ethenic community, the members are of a feasibility of
maintaining their traditional values as well as patriotism to their motherland.
Additionally, this also colors cultural diversity of our new destination. The co-existance
many cultures generate a pealing attraction to a country. Singapore, where the
cross cultural communities have gabbed attention of tourists thanks to a
festival, food is a good example of this.
In conclusion, it is a dilemma to evaluate which sugesstion is better. However,
in my opinion, the immigrants should adopt local convention for convenience in
social life and cherish their traditions at home. This enable them to maitain
the beauty of their own cultures and give a hand to the establishment of
harmonious society.
Mình nghĩ là "of different nationalities" thì đúng ngữ pháp hơn. Hai câu này đọc có vẻ thiếu thiếu cái gì ấy: "The co-existance many cultures generate a pealing attraction to a country. Singapore, where the cross cultural communities have gabbed attention of tourists thanks to a festival, food is a good example of this."
Trả lờiXóa"this enables" and "gives a hand" => bạn quên thêm "s"
Mình chỉ góp ý thôi, ko có gì đâu nha.